A Different History
Sujata Bhatt
Summary: The poet here talks about the affects of
colonization or globalization for that matter. Whatever the case she addresses
a sudden change in the way society thinks and how we should try to preserve it.
She also talks about the loss of culture that comes with globalization and the
loss of part of our history as we reject the teachings of the old culture and
of our old heritage. It could be for this reason that she decided to name the
poem A Different History.
Significant poetic devices and their
significance (eg: Metaphors, symbols, rhyme scheme, form, imagery, repetition…
etc)
Structure
based analysis
1. Note lines 9 to 14 and notice the
indentations of the lines.
“It is a sin to shove a book aside
with
your foot,
a sin to slam books down
hard
on a table,
a sin to toss one carelessly
across
a room”
Note that the poet has done this purposely to accentuate the action described. Similar to when you kick a book, the sentence suddenly shifts to the right, as if you have kicked it into that position. In the same way when you slam a book hard on a table or toss it carelessly across the room you move the book, although perhaps not as far if you had kicked it, thus the exaggerated indentation in the first line.
Note that the poet has done this purposely to accentuate the action described. Similar to when you kick a book, the sentence suddenly shifts to the right, as if you have kicked it into that position. In the same way when you slam a book hard on a table or toss it carelessly across the room you move the book, although perhaps not as far if you had kicked it, thus the exaggerated indentation in the first line.
2. Similarly, the whole of the second
stanza is indented. This shows perhaps a form of limitation or segregation
between the two.
a. The first stanza represents the ones
unaffected by globalization and the western society. People who maintained
their “original” culture.
b. The second stanza represents those
who chose to migrate and are bound to or favour the expat or international or
western culture.
Note that although the degree of indentation is different, the border is
the same. This means that the second stanza has less ‘line space’. This perhaps
can address the issue that the thinking of the next generation is narrower and
less open minded. It also shows how little in breath they know about their
society and their heritage, especially one as rich as India.
3. Assonance. This means that we can
find internal syllables rhyming with each other. Note the word “book”, “foot”, “room”, “wood”, “swooping”. The significance of it being that perhaps with
globalization, you still retain some of your heritage, which still allows you
to be saved. Note how the four “oo” sounds can be found in the first stanza,
while the last one is only found at the end. Perhaps this can be used as an
index to show your level of knowledge of your past. Similarly, it can mean that
you never really truly forget your culture, but perhaps lose a bit or remember
little, no matter how much you are influenced by globalization, colonization or
one of those –izations. Especially in places like America, a lot of the Asians
are Westernised, but keep parts of their heritage alive, perhaps like eating
Chinese food or something.
4. Free verse.
a. This demonstrates the fact that the
poem is a completely free and is basically used to vent the poet’s opinions on
the matter. She perhaps is saying that her opinion belongs to her and she just
wishes to express them onto the world. She could perhaps be saying that she is
not right, nor is she saying that globalization is necessarily a bad thing.
b. On the other hand, she could be
saying that globalization or westernization is a completely different thing, a
phenomena that humans have not ever experienced in the history of us living
together. It breaks all conventions as it has never been done before, similar
to how this poem, with its free verse and peculiar paragraphing, breaks all
conventions of a typical poem.
5. The whole poem is in English. This
completely contradicts the fact that she is ranting about the change in culture
and language and the horrible effects of the something-ization when she is
speaking the language caused by it. She is in this way putting herself not on
the pedestal but beside it, saying that she is one of the stupid something-ized
people to create an empathy link between the reader and the poet, perhaps
making it look as if ‘we can do this
together’ kind of image. She is putting herself in the humble position.
Text
level analysis
1. “Great Pan is not dead; he simply emigrated to India” Take note that Great Pan is the
only God ever died in Roman history. What she is saying here is that he is not
dead, but actually emigrated to India. Take note that people tend to migrate to
places that are more beneficial to us, showcasing the fact that India is a
beautiful place to go to to live your life. She goes on to talk about this in
the next line.
2. “here
the gods roam freely; disguised as snakes or monkeys…” we can find juxtaposition here. How can one
roam freely if you have to disguise yourself as something else? This once again
relates to globalization or one of the –izations. Note that Pan is a Greek God
and he has moved to India. Similarly, it can perhaps show that foreigners are
allowed to roam freely and have been for many years, as long as they do not
make their presence known. They do not separate themselves from the local
people nor do they treat themselves any differently. Therefore they adopt the
culture of the people and act accordingly, similar to how the Gods have to be
succumb to be one of the animals that can be usually found in India (such as
the snakes and monkeys) Become one of the crowd, and you will live a happy
life.
3. “Every tree is sacred
and it is a sin
to be rude to a book.
It is a sin to shove a book aside
with your foot,
a sin to slam books down
hard on a table,
a sin to toss one carelessly
across a room.
You must learn how to turn the pages
gently
without disturbing Sarasvati,”
Here she continues her description, using the word sacred, relating to the divinity of the area, as if the area was a
garden for Gods. However, she starts becoming negatives and starts listing what
not to do. She uses the contrasting word, sin,
to exemplify the vast contrast between the two and to make what you are not
allowed to do a mortal sin, something that is almost a tragedy to do. Once
again, note the repetition of the word sin,
once again amplifying how terrible it is to do such a thing. At the end she
explains her actions that we must learn to respect books and use them in such a
way that would make Sarasvati, the God of the arts, happy. The poet obviously treats poetry as an art so
it would be normal for her to be mentioned.
Books, of course, hold history, and she is basically saying that we
should respect our history (culture, heritage… wink wink)
4.
“without offending the tree
from whose wood paper was made.”
Of course by this she is saying that to not insult the tree, who
sacrificed its life to make a work of art that we can do nothing else but enjoy
and appreciate what it has done for us.
5. “Which
language ,
has not been the oppressor’s tongue?
Which language
Truly meant to murder someone?”
has not been the oppressor’s tongue?
Which language
Truly meant to murder someone?”
Here she is addressing the loss in language. Because of globalization,
we are now speaking the tongue of the foreigners. It is this way that she is
using this as a form of mockery to say
that ‘by speaking the language of the enemy, we have already given up mentally’. She is trying to say in a sense ‘wake up! Can’t you see what you’re doing? Why are you speaking the tongue of our enemies? Which language destroyed (murdered) our heritage/culture?’ It can be a slap to the dignity and the inner heritage of every man.
that ‘by speaking the language of the enemy, we have already given up mentally’. She is trying to say in a sense ‘wake up! Can’t you see what you’re doing? Why are you speaking the tongue of our enemies? Which language destroyed (murdered) our heritage/culture?’ It can be a slap to the dignity and the inner heritage of every man.
Oppressor à Conquerer
6. “And
how does it happen
that after the torture,
after the soul has been cropped
with a long scythe swooping out
of the conqueror’s face-
the unborn grandchildren
grow to love that strange language.”
that after the torture,
after the soul has been cropped
with a long scythe swooping out
of the conqueror’s face-
the unborn grandchildren
grow to love that strange language.”
This is obviously an attack on the morals of every man in India,
basically by trying to get them guilty. Of course here she is saying that the
something-izers have caused a lot of turmoil in a country that was otherwise
very happy before. They have tortured us and made us do things we didn’t like (after the torture,after the soul has been
cropped with a long scythe swooping out of the conqueror’s face-)perhaps
either physically or mentally, or both. Why is it that after all this time that
the next generation (unborn
grandchildren) are going to grow up in that strange language? This
demonstrates the despair in the heart of the poet as she already knows that the
children are about to adopt the language of the foreigners, perhaps because the
father or mother have already grown to love that language because it is already
so deeply ingrained into the minds of the people that make up the society. They
don’t even know how to talk their own native language anymore. The fact that
she mentions grandchild illustrates
the fact that she is talking to the elders, the ones most considered wise in
almost every society. This shows that she is talking to them, indicating that
getting an audience with them is hard and that only people with relevant
arguments can arrange a meeting with them, making her argument a very
significant one.
7. The use of repetition in the last
stanza “which language”. In addition to the phrase being on its own line, this
phrase exudes an accusive tone in her phrase, expressing severe criticalness in
her expression.
Speaker of the poem: The writer
herself. Sujata Bhatt
Speaker’s attitude toward the subject of the
poem: Dissatisfied, distressed, hopeful, still optimistic that we can change, moralistic,
relies of emotions rather than logic (emotional)
Paired poems (Identify poems in the anthology
and why they are appropriate to be paired)
1. Perhaps The Planners in the sense of inevitability and distress over the
fact that nothing will ever be the same again and how fake everything really is
and how different it is compared to the past. It also in a sense mocks the
system that governs the development implying that it causes more damage than
good.
2. Where I come from in the sense of the comparison between urbanization and rural
atmosphere. We can to a certain extent say the same as India was really quite a
rural area before one of those –izations.
3. Where I come from as we can see a similar style in structure as they are split to show a
bigger contrast and that there is a indentation in the beginning of the second
stanza.
Memorable lines
1.
“You must learn how to turn the
pages gently without disturbing Sarasvati”
2.
“Here the gods roam freely,
disguised as snakes or monkeys”
3.
“without offending the tree from
whose wood the paper was made”
4.
“Which language truly meant to
murder someone?”
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ReplyDeleteSarasvati is the God of Education actually not art.
ReplyDeleteSarasvati is the God of knowledge and creativity
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ReplyDeleteI have to say, as an Indian-American, this analysis is horribly offensive. Bhatt is one of my favourite poets - how can you possibly say that she is 'ranting' about 'something-ization'? And the last stanza is not 'obviously an attack on [Indian morals]'! I have no idea where you find that! There is a difference between an accusatory attack and a regretful passage. I'm afraid you don't really understand the poem - try reading up on Bhatt's background, or maybe some of her other works.
ReplyDeleteWhat does the poem mean to you?
DeleteI may not be Indian but I agree with David Grounds. This blog is too shallow in terms of poem analysis. I'm in sixth form and I do way better than this Matthew dude
DeleteIt makes all of us IGCSE students happy. It gives us something to read as an alternative to our shitty revision notes... Give the guy some respect, he's helping a lot of desperate last minute revision students out... and I'm sorry to break it to you but not all of us are going to read up on Indian history the night before our exam in a vain attempt to understand a poem that we are not particularly interested in.
DeleteThank you for sharing your opinion, but you can't really compare yourself to an IGCSE student and expect them to be "better" than you..
I totally agree with Lucy Ashmore, we're all trying to get the last few days of studying done before the exams, and if we see something that sounds good and something that can be put down in an exam in order to gain marks, we note it down. Simple as.
DeleteNo, this post should not be used for last-minute exam cramming. David Grounds is correct in saying that Matthew has the deeper implications of the poem interpreted all wrong. When we analysed it in my class, the poem was described as a personal struggle, one where Bhatt felt disdain at a culture's potential debilitation. She resolves her struggle by the end by realising that the language is not to blame, but the speaker, and a language also has the potential to bring joy. Her final question in the second stanza does not have a question mark on the end, because she realises the answer to it. Please do not say that the poem is an attack on Indian (or any!) culture's morals. The markers will not like that one bit.
DeleteYou know what? This paper is about opinion. Examiners don't mark you down because you have completely different points to the person next to you. If you have an opinion that you can back up-which Matthew has- this you get the marks, and as i have my exam tomorrow morning, that's certainly why I'm here! Sure its a good idea to read up on Bhatt, and this poem-but perhaps after our IGCSEs are finished is a better time to do that. I personally think Matthew's analysis was helpful, and I feel a lot more confident about getting a question on this poem.
DeleteI know this is pretty late but I felt I should say this. the way we analyze poems is not always the same( unlike in logical subjects where 1+1 will always be 2 )and if you have proof to back up whatever point you think you have, then it is considered correct but if your offense is merely his choice of vocabulary and not actually his perception of the poem, that's understandable.
DeleteNice analysis! Will help me in the exams lol. But I find this poem really annoying for some reason...I don't know why.
ReplyDeleteThe reason why the "Gods roam freely disguised as snakes and monkeys" is not because of globalization but because in Hindu mythology there are over thousands of Gods and each of them have a different avatar, or get up. Some may take the mortal form of an animal, plant, mountain etc. Therefore, the flora and fauna in this case can be related to the Great Pan. Hence the poet says that he "emigrated to India"
ReplyDeleteWould u please to discuss the main themes in this poem?
DeleteI'm not Indian at all, but I think David Grounds and 'DontGetItTwisted' have got it twisted! I think this is a perfect analysis because it's Matthews genuine response to the poem and his judgments have been formed against evidence that he has provided. If you disagree then form your own judgments, make sure they are based on evidence and don't put the guy on blast for having his own point of view.
ReplyDeleteI think this was helpful......... n being an indian I don't think mythology has a single perspective.......... it depends on how each one sees it.........
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ReplyDeletethe something-ized should be colonized, like how the british colonized india
ReplyDeleteHow amazing! This would help me in exam.
ReplyDeleteWould someone please to discuss the
ReplyDeletemain themes of this poem?
I will be extremely thankful for him or her.
What are the themes used in this poem?
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