William Wordsworth
Summary of the poem:
The poet stands on Westminster Bridge, at that time the
bridge the only structure connecting the rich area of London and the poor area
of London. On the left side we see the richer side of London, and the right
side the poor side. Of course, there were less bridges then and things have
changed. However the point is that he writes his poem based on his view, both
of the rich and poor, showing unbiased attitude. The fact that he sees both
gives the readers a sense of the poet being omniscient, as from that side, he
sees all. He writes about the beauty of the city that he sees and the potential
it has to be something greater than he can ever imagine. The poet likes to
address a lot of reoccurring themes, possibly to make us contemplate more about
the city later on after we have read the poem.
Significant poetic devices and their
significance (eg: Metaphors, symbols, rhyme scheme, form, imagery, repetition…
etc)
1.
Take note that of course this is not the usual
Shakesperean sonnet that we are used to. His thoughts and feelings are
displayed in the form of a Petrarchan sonnet, or an Italian sonnet.
Characteristics include:
i. Perhaps in this
case used to make the poem have a catchy rhythm to it.
- Rhymed with 5 rhymes or
less. The octave made up of envelope quatrains rhymed abbaabba is
followed by a sestet made up of 2 tercets with a choice of envelope,
chained or alternate rhyme. cdccdc or cdecde or cdcdcd.
- Composed with a volta (non
physical gap) or pivot (a shifting or tilting of the main line of
thought) between the octave and the sestet. The epiphany (manifestation
or realization) unravels slowly from octave to sestet.
There’s no more that I can say actually. Everything I want to say here
has already been done for me.
2. Paradox: “A sight so touching in its majesty”
while the word ‘touching’ presents a
more gently and intimate sense, majesty illustrates something more public and
grand. Wordsworth captures the indescribable feeling of familiarity and
distance.
3. Initial rhyme
scheme is repetitive and regular which gives a heartbeat/pulse to the poem like
the heartbeat of the city. The consistency could also imply stead breathing as
if the city is asleep. The break in the rhyme scheme quickens the pace as it is
constant and shorter, as if the poet has fully recognised the true beauty of
the city on closer inspection.
4. Imagery: Gives a
vivid sense of peace and emphasis the admiration of the poet. Words such as “beauty”, “bright and glittering” allows
the reader to easily picture what Wordsworth experienced; the poet shares his
awe and admiration of the sight which are essential to help him convey his
message. “silent” and “bare”give a sense of tranquillity. The
inactivity infers a lack of human life, with only the narrator. The
individuality reinforces the beautiful sight.
Text-based Analysis
1. The first two lines
are literal, and say what they completely mean. However, in the third line, the
poet starts to talk about his how the appearance of the city starts to look
like royalty. “A sight so touching in its
majesty”. The use of the word “majesty”
exemplifies this. Furthermore this is a sign of personification as towns
cannot be considered royalty as they are only used for humans. Therefore we are
giving the town a human attribute. It is in this sense that he is trying to
make the city itself look alive, as if we are the parts that are keeping it
alive, like the organs of the human body. We are the organs of the city, if
that makes any sense.
2. “This City now doth like a garment wear” Notice
that the word City is spelt with the
first letter in higher case, as if a title.
a. This indicates that
the poet is trying to put the city higher than any other one that we might come
across, as if thisis the best city there is.
b. Alternatively it
can be related to the previous line and that we are giving the city its name,
which is just “City”. If this is so, we can say that the poet is just using
personification. This is further justified when he uses yet another
personification to describe the beauty of the city “like a garment wear”. Note that at the time the use of the word garment was used specifically for
higher class people, once again illustrating the fact that the poet is trying
to relate the city as a human entity. Not only that but he is trying to relate
it to one as higher class, perhaps a noble, or even royalty.
3. “The beauty of the morning; silent, bare”note
the adjectives used. The use of the peculiar adjectives, “silent, bare” illustrate the fact that the city is beautiful in its
most simplistic form. It doesn’t even have to be awake to show off its beauty.
This gives the image of raw beauty that the city doesn’t even have to try and
look its best to be considered beautiful. Think about the lion that you saw at
the zoo. Think of it as asleep, similarly, the lion is beautiful even though it
is “silent” and “bare”. Once again I say it – raw beauty. This contradicts on what
the poet has said before about the city wearing a garment. You say that it
doesn’t have to wear anything to be beautiful, yet you are saying that it
dresses up, so that you can comment on it. It’s as if you see an actress on the
red carpet wearing her best dress and getting her make up done by the best, and
you say that she is ‘raw beauty’. Also, take note as well that at the time, “The beauty of the morning” was
considered a classic romantic phrase. It is one of the only times in the poem
that natural beauty is mentioned. The rest are usually man-made. This implies
the fact that both nature and development has a key in the production of such a
city, and it has to be beautiful as it was created by two amazing ‘people’.
4. “Ships, towers, domes, theatres and temples
lie”. Although there isn’t a name for it, there should be one to describe
this literary device, listing. Take
note of the way that the poet is just listing out a couple of attributes that
the city has. This could relate to the earlier lines of the paragraph and the
features he is describing now is the “garment” of the city.
a. The
fact that he has listed so many of these features gives the impression that he
wishes to go on but cannot, to upkeep the structure of the Italian sonnet. It
also gives the image of the poet being emotionally engulfed at this point in
time, as there are too many things that he is so passionate about and wishes to
go on in detail about but can’t.
b. Also
note the lack of adjectives to describe the features. This gives the impression
that the poet is trying to imply the fact that the word by itself is enough.
There is nothing more needed to exemplify its beauty. This can be related once
again to one the poet was talking about raw beauty. There isn’t anything more
needed to make the feature look better than it is, it is already perfect. No
“garments” needed.
c. Note
the “temple” bit described at the end. Temples are used for two reasons. One is
that they are usually one of the most beautiful things that we see in the city
it has to. It is the house of God after all. Secondly, the use of the word temple gives the image of the city
itself being just and scared (something hard to find nowadays), inducing the
reader to pour out even more respect for such a city.
5. “Open unto the fields, and to the sky”
a. This
gives a sense of freedom for the reader as fields
usually refer to vast open spaces and the sky
itself is infinite. This makes the reader feel ecstatic as we usually feel
happy in open spaces to run and around, making it look as if we are the king of
the world and that we can do anything we want. I can’t help but think of this
meme whenever vastness is mentioned.
b.
Secondly it also addresses the unknown aura
around it. We have never explored every bit of the sky (if that makes any
sense) nor have we explored all the fields. This creates a sense of adventure,
inspiring a very positive feeling in the reader, as if we are about to go on a
journey into the wilderness (can’t help but think about Pokemon here)
6. “All bright and glittering in the smokeless
air” This is yet another part of the time that the poet talks about natural
beauty. Once again this means that nature also has a part of the beauty of the
city, making it easier for the reader to empathise with. We don’t know what the
city itself looks like, but we do know what nature is like assuming that the
climate is the same of course. However still we can view features of nature
much more easily than cities, as there are much more variables involved. Therefore
the fact that the natural aspect of the city is so amazing can reflect the
beauty of the city as well.
7. “Never did the sun more beautifully steep in his
first splendour, valley, rock, or hill” Note the personification as we gave
the sun a sex. This may indicate that the sun is alive, and as such we always
think of it as happy we usually relate light and warmth with happy feelings as
we are able to see our surroundings and can see things coming our way (at a
biological level), giving a sense of security as well. It also ‘bathes the city
in a good light’, creating the image that the city itself is a happy one, and
that everyone is healthy, beautiful and cheerful giving the indication that the
city described is a beautiful place to live in. Once again note the “valley, rock, or hill” that include
listing once again, without any adjectives whatsoever. However, these are
natural landforms, enforcing my other point about nature and humans working
together to create a physical piece of art.
8. “The river glideth at its own sweet will:”
We can find personification. Based on the bridge he was standing on, we can
safely assume that the river he was talking about was indeed the River Thames.
The use of the personification here is to create the image of the river itself
being happy as we find that it ahs the freedom of choice and the ability to do
anything it wanted here, as if it also wanted to be part of the city, a city
where we get to enjoy the freedom of choice.
9. “Dear God! the very houses seemasleep; and all that
mighty heart is lying still” The use of the phrase “Dear God!” is to exemplify that even the
poet is still blown away by the beauty of the city despite already having
described it for so long. It is here that the poet is trying to say that it is
beautiful already when you look at it, but on closer inspection, it is much
more beautiful than you already think it is.
a. Once again we find
personification when we say that the houses are asleep. This means that
everyone is sleeping. Usually when we are awake we turn on the light, making it
look as if the house has opened its eyes. Such is the structure of the typical
house. Another form of personification is finally used in the city when we say
“that mighty heart is lying still”
this gives the indication that the poem is trying the express onto the readers
that we have not seen its full beauty. Wait till it awakens. We can therefore
assume that the writer wrote this in the wee hours of morning when everyone
(the city) was still asleep.
This whole poem itself is a giant hyperbole.
Speaker of the poem: The poet
himself, William Wordsworth
Speaker’s attitude toward the
subject of the poem:Thankful to God for allowing him to see such a beautiful sight. In a way
we can call him patriotic.
Paired poems (Identify poems in the anthology and
why they are appropriate to be paired)
1. Pied Beauty as he is also expressing his beauty
for the world in general, while Wordsworth is talking about the city of London
and he expresses its beauty.
2. Pied Beauty as it allows us to see the contrast
between nature and man-made structures, as Wordsworth mainly talks about
man-made structures in a certain area only while the poet of Pied Beauty does the opposite. He talks
about natural structures everywhere (well, his world, Europe. He couldn’t
travel very far at the time)
3. Summer Farm as the poet talks about the beauty
of nature found in the farm. Similarly Wordsworth is talking about the beauty
of both man-made structures and a bit of nature found in London, the country of
description.
Memorable lines (that reinforce poetic devices)
1. The city now doth like a garment wear
2. A sight so touching in its majesty
3. Ships, towers, domes, theatres, and temples lie
4. And all that mighty heart is lying still
As a examiner I must say great analysis. All of them are great. They are organised and I hope more teachers will be using your notes. They are well organised and please keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletenot Octave but Octet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)
ReplyDeletegreat otherwise thanks!!
It is octave
DeleteI don't quite see how the entire poem is a giant hyperbole. Is this left up to personal interpretation, or am I reading the poem wrong?
ReplyDeleteLiterature is all bout personal response :)
Deletethanks mann
ReplyDelete*_*
ReplyDeletewhat is metrical rhythm?
ReplyDeleteIs it a petrarchan sonnet?
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